Posted by on Apr 6, 2006 in Uncategorised | 2 Comments

Writing Ethics – voice and appropriation of voice

Voice is what all writers of literary fiction are supposed to strive for: that distinctive, ‘hooky’ element of writing that gives personality to the prose, rather than the protagonist.

Appropriation of voice is a politically correct term that says certain people aren’t allowed to write in the voice of certain other people. Like, for example, white people writing as black people, or healthy, well-educated men writing as drug addicts. The point should be about truth – that we shouldn’t pretend a thing is true when it isn’t: clearly that’s lying whether it’s done face to face or on a page and it fails a whole number of tests from honesty to the Trade Descriptions Act. If I buy a memoir by a teenage prostitute who sells his body for crack cocaine, I have every right to be refunded if it turns out the ‘true history’ was written by a middle aged woman from Milton Keynes.

Sadly, this silly pronouncement about appropriation of voice extends to fiction too. I am not the only writer who’s had nasty emails or letters about fiction that extended beyond my own white female persona, but others are not as able to talk about it. A church congregation in South London wrote to me complaining that one of my stories portrayed black male youth in a bad light and that – anyway- I had no ‘right’ to present my fiction in the voice of a black male because I’d ‘stolen’ an identity.

Excuse me?

This is a downright silly idea. The list of great books that would never have been published on this basis includes Madame Bovary (a man writing as a woman) , The White Hotel (a man writing as a woman who experienced the Holocaust) and The Sound and The Fury (a white man writing as three other white men, one of them a mentally handicapped boy, and a black man), and of course we couldn’t have Robinson Crusoe becuase Daniel Defoe was not actually himself shipwrecked, or Moll Flanders, because he wasn’t a female prostitute either.

The ultimate absurdity of this ‘appropriation of voice’ edict is that nobody could write science fiction unless they were aliens, or ghost stories unless they were dead.

A writer of fiction should stand or fall by the quality of their fiction. If I can convince you I’m a young black man, then that’s all that matters. I’m not claiming to be a reporter – fiction isn’t about ‘telling it like it is’ regardless of all the people who claim exactly that. Fiction is about telling a good story – if that happens to illuminate truth along the way it’s a bonus, but it’s not the purpose of the art.

2 Comments

  1. Edward Moore
    7th April 2006

    You’re so on the money about this topic. I’ve gotten the opposite reaction a number of time. I wrote a story classified at chick lit, and people were shocked that it turned out as good as it did.

    Well the fact of the matter is most of us listen and observe people and consciously or unconsciously absorb tibits of information that allows us to develop characters whose heads we can get into. Any guy who has seen his sister or ‘lady friends’ go through the dating scene can see some of the pitfalls and develop stories around them.

    I’ve never fought in a war, but I’ve listened to many stories from those who have. Some a heart stopping, but if I listened to some of the people you describe, I’d never write about soldiers and experiences they may have. Taken to the extreme, crime, fantasy and science fiction would never exist.

    Another great comment from a great writer.

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  2. Paul Campbell
    10th April 2006

    I sent a batch of proposals out recently to a producer, hoping they might want to pay me to develop one or two of them into a drama.

    The response was as follows…

    I have looked at Paul’s proposals and sorry, but none of them leap out at me as being something really beyond the ordinary; but more importantly, they all require a style and personal voice [and in the case of the Asian registrar, the young London kids, and the the ideas involving women’s personal experiences and take on the world] need very particular personal first hand experience and / or understanding.

    Next time, I’ll just send them the story about the forty-year-old, middle class white bloke who thinks he’s a writer.

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