Posted by on Nov 1, 2006 in Uncategorised | One Comment

How removing one punctuation element improved my writing I just cut this sentence from a short story I’ve been working on for a couple of weeks, ‘They all had their tics and devices to get through; their amulets and fetishes and good luck charms, rituals and neuroses and superstitious behaviours.’It’s not a bad sentence in […]

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